My latest studio creation on which I've decided to invest effort. I've got a number of jams/song seeds that I've created in the past couple weeks, but this one is the most promising -- or rather, the one I like best -- so far. So I'm going to run with it.The title is a working title, but it's very likely going to end up being close to this, as I'm already quite hooked on the chorus, and my attempts to change the words have been less than convincing. Other strong possibilities (that, in my mind, then themselves to a little more freedom in developing the rest of the lyrics) include:
Maybe it's a way of breaking your heart
Baby got away. It's breaking my heart.
Meh. I think I'll still with what I have.
This demo is very rough. You've been warned.
Update: Nov. 7, 2013
I've been dogged by (1) lack of time and (2) slow-in-coming lyrical inspiration on this one. But I've finally got lyrics that are mostly acceptable....I think. Anyway, at least now you have something a bit more interesting to listen to than the same incomplete first verse repeated three times.
This is a rough mix after putting down the vocals with new lyrics last night. My voice was not "on," so I really need to re-record them. Also I'm not sure if I'm going to keep all if any of the harmony vox I threw down.
I've remixed this a couple times since last night, but it's still a bumpy mix, with things poking out where they shouldn't and other things buried beneath the surface. But it will give you an idea of where I am.
Update: Nov. 19, 2013
I'm getting closer, my salamander. (But still no cigar.)
First comments.....funky....chunky....and chewy (chorus that is)....nice little hook...this song say's thread the waters of overproduction carefully..;)
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